Monday, June 14, 2021

Lawyer Paragraph


 Today we did a plan on how to write a lawyer paragraph so we are ready for our writing sample our topic was Screentime negatively affects learning we had to choose if we agreed or disagreed.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Morgan, this is great feedback you did a great job, next time you could maybe work on getting your sentence length a little bit longer to get your percentage up. Keep up the great work. :)

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