Monday, March 15, 2021

Writing

 The view from the top. 

Gregory was at a Carnival and was just about to leave but he wanted to try out one more thing, the Ferris wheel. So he did just that. Gregory hopped into the line and waited patiently by himself. When it was his turn on the Ferris wheel the Ride instructor helped him onto his seat and off he went. He continued going higher and higher until once he reached the top it came to a halt. From the bottom the ride Instructor was yelling very faintly "If your by yourself you've scored your self luck today, anyone riding together may or may not tip over so hold on!" I took a sigh of relief. I watched as one by one certain seats were flipping and people were going round in round in the sky holding for dear life. But then out of nowhere the Ferris wheel started going again. When anyone got a chance at being at the bottom they hopped off But not Gregory he stayed on because he knew that he was absolutely fine. That's when he knew that from that day on whenever he wanted to go on a Ferris wheel he would go alone because it's better safe than sorry.

The end

By Morgan A.

1 comment:

  1. hi i really like that you put full stops in the right place keep it up

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